2020年11月7日写作考题
People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?
题目大意：
有些人犯了罪之后还会去犯罪。为什么？如何阻止？
思路：
这道题目属于犯罪话题。为什么人们犯罪了还会去犯罪，主要原因归根于社会问题而不是罪犯本身。当然罪犯肯定有罪，但是人都是社会的动物，人们的一言一行都是受到相互的影响。所以，社会的深层次的问题影响到了犯罪本身。特别是教育问题，就业问题等等。因此阻止或者说预防的方式应该是提高全民的教育素质和社会的公平和财富的再分配而不是简单的坐牢就能解决。
审题，找出敏感词/限定词：
Crime限定 criminal，culprit
Punish限定 penalty
提纲梳理如下:
MODEL:
It is always one of the government’s priorities to reduce crime rate in order to ensure social security. Among all the crimes, many are committed by ex-criminals. Hence, people start to examine the reasons of re-offence and methods to prevent illegal activities.
The chief cause for re-offence is for the sake of survival. Many criminals, after being imprisoned for years without contacting with the outside world, have been detached from the society. The skills they have become obsolete and no longer match the current job requirements. Moreover, usually employers are reluctant to hire people who used to be convicted because being criminals seems to indicate character flaws or lack of morality. It can be tough for people who left jail to find occupations, thereby unable to support a living. Thus, many of them continue to commit crimes after being punished to have a source of income or even to get themselves back to jail again where they do not have to worry about not having food to eat and shelter to sleep.
To reduce crime rate, there are several feasible ways. The first measure is rehabilitation in jail and after release. The government can conduct career training sessions to equip the criminals with the skills necessary for them to find a job after serving the sentence. Meanwhile, the perfection of social guarantee system for released people, such as encouraging companies to hire ex-convicts further enhance the condition of people who have left jail. Secondly, the importance of education cannot be underestimated. There can be more publicity on the severity of crimes to the public in order to deter people from committing crimes. The government should also try to ensure proper domestic education as children who grow up with parents or guardians who have bad habits may imitate what they see. This can be achieved by constant home visits to evaluate the condition of children, and finding appropriate foster families for children.
To sum up, the primary reason for people to re-offend after being punished is their inability to make a living after release. Rehabilitation for convicts and education are solutions that can be used to prevent crimes from happening.
相关词汇：
Priority 优先考虑
re-offence再犯罪
Detach 分离
Convict宣判
Morality道德
Rehabilitation康复
