The government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe it is individuals' responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
题目大意
政府有责任确保公民的饮食健康,而另一部分人认为这是个人自己的责任。问题:双边讨论并给出自己看法?
写作思路解析
➡️规划写作任务,论证过程分两个方面:
➡️1.个人的责任.:
1)缺乏自制力:很难抵御甜品,零食,垃圾食品的诱惑
2)重视工作多与健康:饮食不规律或者暴饮暴食;在途中进食。
➡️2. 政府的责任:
1)推广健康饮食,因为很多人缺乏相关的认知
2)确保食品安全,对于一些危害食品安全的行为要加强监管和惩处的力度
审题,找出关键词/限定词:
本题审题部分基本没有难度,非常清晰。主题词就是health diet。一般而言,饮食习惯是非常个人的事,所以主要有个体自己负责。在这道题目中,如果要论述政府也有义务相对麻烦一些。那么要站政府这一边需要的突破口应该是在饮食方面有什么是政府能做而个人是无能为力的。笔者在这里给出的就是对食品安全问题的监管和惩处,只能由政府来完成。
提纲梳理见下
写作示范
It is argued that whether the government has the obligation to participate in an effort to stem the country’s increasing epidemic of obesity and a host of other chronic problems resulting from unhealthy diet. Although it appears to be more to a matter of personal choice, personally, I believe that there leave some actions to be desired from the authorities side.
Admittedly, people have every right to live their own life especially in the aspect of food choice. Therefore, it is the individuals who are to be blamed if they unfortunately fall into unhealthy eating habit. For example, because of the lack of self-discipline, people cannot resist the urge to order a decadent dessert or deny themselves the pleasure of snacks and junk food. Or for people who value work above health, they starve themselves all day, and then gorge themselves until bedtime or eat on the run, standing up or while driving.
Such as it is, however, the government still has much of a role to play in the attempts to safeguard the health diet of its citizen. First of all, the government could revise dietary recommendations and guidelines that emphasize proper nutrition and motivate personal initiative in maintaining a healthy diet, as it is indicated that the overwhelming majority of people have little nutrition elementary knowledge, dietary safety common sense and cooking knowledge. Secondly, it is the responsibility of the government to take every possible measure to ensure food safety in the country. Administrative systems need to be created administrative systems in a bid to prevent food safety incidents and raise the overall level of food safety. In a fight against the illegal use of additives, people can only count on the authorities to intensify supervision and increase penalties for violators.
In conclusion, it requires the effort from both sides to address the prevalence of unhealthy diet. The government definitely has an essential part to play in an effort to reverse the situation.