看朗阁汇总雅思10大常见雅思写作失分点!

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内容摘要:雅思写作中常见的失分点是什么呢?现在就让我们来看看石家庄朗阁教育分享的内容吧。
IELTS 写作测验评分标准分为四项:任务完成/回答情况、文章结构与连贯性、词汇使用、文法及正确性。
 
以下列出几个雅思考生易犯的文法及词汇错误,改掉这些小地方,就能减少失分机会,写出更流畅的文章!
01
(X) Driving makes us lazy…on the other hand it also affects the environment.
(V) Driving makes us lazy…on top of that it also affects the environment.
(V) Driving make us lazy…On the other hand though, it is an easy way to get around the city.
 
关键失分点:
使用「On the other hand 」来表示相反的论点,不能用来支持你的论点。
 
02
(X) There was a dramatically increase
(V) There was a dramatic increase
 
关键失分点:
描述变化时(尤其是在Task 1 的题目里),应使用形容词+ 名词(例如:dramatic increase) 或是动词+ 副词(例如:it increased dramatically)。
 
03
(X) …is an important reason for this. Besides, people also…
(V) …is an important reason for this. Besides this/ In addition, people also…
 
关键失分点:
常有烤鸭使用「Besides」来连结各种想法,但这是错误用法。「Besides」较常在口语英文中使用,意思是「anyway」(无论如何) 或「regardless」(不管怎样)。在写作中,如果你想用这个字来加入论点或事实,那么你可以用「besides this/that」或「in addition」。
 
04
(X) Reading can help us get more knowledge
(V) We can learn a lot from reading
 
关键失分点:
此句子文法正确,但「knowledge」的用法不太自然。这个名词在英文里不太常使用。在英文中,我们时常使用的是形容词knowledgeable (例如:he is very knowledgeable)。或者,我们会使用动词「to learn」或「to understand」。
 
05
(X) If this continues, animals will extinct
(V) If this continues, animals will be/ become extinct
 
关键失分点:
「Extinct」是形容词而非动词。因此,你还得加上其他动词,例如:「are」、「will be」、「will become」、「have become」等
 
06
(X) Nowaday, many people are….
(V) Nowadays, many people are….
 
关键失分点:
少了s差很多,没有Nowaday的用法喔!
 
07
(X) 40% of 60 years old people drive cars.
(V) 40% of 60 year old people drive cars.
(V) 40% of 60 year olds drive cars.
 
关键失分点:
如果要表示某人的岁数,「years」应为复数(例如:he is 60 years old)。要用年龄来形容某人时,则不需复数形「s」(例如:a 60 year old man)。年龄也可当作名词使用。如果名词为复数,就应该在「old」的后面加上「s」(例如:60 year olds are healthier than they used to be)。
 
08
(X) Many people in the Japan believe that….
(V) Many people in Japan believe that….
 
关键失分点:
碰到国名,大部分情况下前面不需使用定冠词「the」。例如:American、Japan、England、France,不会写成「the France」,但是,如果国家名为缩写形式,或为岛屿、国家或州群,那么我们就会使用「the」。例如:The UK、The USA、The Philippines 等。
 
09
(X) It Is obviously that exercising frequently is good for your health.
(V) It Is obvious that exercising frequently is good for your health.
 
关键失分点:
「Obviously」是副词。在此句型(It is _______ that),要使用的是形容词。
 
10
(X) In this essay, I will describe about the problems and suggest some solutions.
(V) In this essay, I will describe the problems and suggest some solutions.
 
关键失分点:
有些动词会与介系词并用(搭配),但有些不用接介系词。我们可以说「talk about」,但不会说「describe about」,而是只用「describe」。