雅思作文7分范文:自由选择工作VS为将来着想

来源:朗阁教育 作者:小木 浏览: 更新时间:2021-08-05 17:00

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Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
 
题目大意
 
有人认为年轻人可以自由选择工作,另一方认为找工作应该现实更多的为将来着想,双边讨论?
 
写作思路解析
 
 
规划写作任务,论证过程分两大方面:
1. 现实的选择工作:教育经历
                           收入需要能满足日常开销
2. 自由的选择工作:做不喜欢的工作不会成功
                           工作的满足感更重要
                           做喜欢的工作才能有所成就
 
审题,找出关键词
 
➡️free:自由的程度和限定可以进一步思考。
➡️realistic:现实的工作可以涉及那几个方面。
➡️future:怎样的工作对将来有益。
 
提纲梳理见下
写作示范
 
Whether the youth should make their career choices according to what they enjoy doing or in light of monetary values or future development is a frequent topic of discussion.  Although they can not afford to ignore certain realistic factors, personally, job satisfaction is overall the single most important factor to consider.  
 
Admittedly, the ability to pursue careers may hinge on the financial situation as some career paths require special schooling and qualifications and this is sometimes expensive.  Furthermore, youths should take into consideration if the career path they are choosing will provide them with an acceptable level of financial security.  Namely, whether the take-home salary will be enough to support themselves or their family or to cover their health insurance and retirement options as well.   
However, such realistic factors put too much pressure on people who are trying to choose the right career.  I believe, the youth are entitled to make career decision according to their own will.  Firstly, more values could be attached to job satisfaction.  It these realistic considerations are forced on them, they may probably end up being miserable. As average person works about 40 hours a week till the age of 40 years – approximately 80,000 hours of their life will be spent on their work, which does make it important to do the job they love, find one that is a good fit for their interests, aptitudes, work-related values and personality type.  In this case, they are more likely to prosper in their work as they enjoy the majority of the job duties.   
 
It might be for some people, work is a necessary evil, but there are also instances where people choose a career more than a means of livelihood, if they are allowed to make their own choice.