雅思作文7分范文及解析:老年人和年轻人竞争工作

来源:朗阁教育 作者:小木 浏览: 更新时间:2021-07-04 16:18

内容摘要:石家庄朗阁教育给大家分享的雅思写作范文是什么,如果你想要了解一下,那么现在就赶紧来看看吧。
报告类大作文,社会类话题
Older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problems does this cause? And what are the solutions?
 
题目来源:2016年4月21日亚太雅思大作文
 
题目大意
老年人为了工作不得不和年轻人竞争。提问:这会造成什么问题?有没有解决方案?
 
思路解析
这是一道非常具有现实意义的社会类话题,各位还在读书的考鸭宝宝如果关注过“延迟退休年龄”的新闻和相关的利弊讨论,应该能理解这道题目的现实背景。审题时要注意的是,题目是围绕“old people”展开的,因此不管造成的问题、解决办法,都要针对这个群体来分析。
 
月半鸭来和大家一起梳理下,会引发什么问题,根本原因是什么,以及应该如何解决。
 
老年人为了工作和年轻人竞争主要引发三方面的问题。
一是会加大整体就业的竞争压力。当就业岗位总体不变的时候,更多的老年人就业意味着总体就业人数增加,进而导致就业竞争更加激烈。
 
二是老年人可能难以获得一个公平就业机会,遭到企业的歧视。虽然老年人可能经验更丰富,但是体力和对部分新兴技术的接受度、掌握度和运用不如年轻人。因此老年人为了能够胜任岗位,不得不去学习新的技能, 这会加重老年人的负担。另一方面,由于无法掌握新技能,可能会加大老年人的失业风险,而且很难再就业。进而导致老年人可能面临生活困难。
 
三是对于企业来说,保留过多的老年人岗位可能降低企业的工作效率。诸如像快递邮政、交通运输等需要体力的工作,还有像互联网、创新技术等需要创新的工作,老年人的效率远不如年轻人。另一方面,老年人因为工作年限久可能会占据更高的职位,这意味企业能用来激励年轻人的上升通道变少,可能造成年轻人的积极度下降从而导致整体工作效率下降。
 
那么,大家思考下,老年人为什么会和年轻人竞争工作?
 
说白了,为了生计。
如果不是为了赚钱,谁高兴上班。
这点不管老年人还是年轻人都一样。
 
所以,想明白上面这个根本原因,我们能给出的解决方案有两个。
 
一是政府或者社会能提供养老、医疗等福利保障老年人生活,包括退休生活。如果生活有保障了,老年人自然不用和年轻人竞争工作岗位。
 
二是退而求其次,政府或社会可以想办法提供更多老年人能够胜任的就业岗位,来降低竞争压力。以及开展针对性的技能培训,帮助老年人提升就业竞争力。
 
提纲
范文示例
These days, city has become a front line in a generational battle for jobs, as older workers increasingly compete against younger applicants for positions.  There are some consequences caused by this phenomenon,and possible approach es could be adopted to address the negative consequence.  
 
The fact that nowadays many people working longer, well past retirement age will inevitably causes some social problems.  For one thing, with the increasing number of older population in the job market, the existing job positions may not be sufficient to meet the growing demands.  For another, older workers will experience occupational stress and strains when there is a mismatch between the requirements of the job and the capabilities of workers.  Especially, when it come to the job which have implications for physical stamina and frequent mobility or constant updating of knowledge and technology, the ageing process will have potential for reduced performance.  
 
There are some measures to mitigate the challenges of an ageing population in the workplace, as retirees often complain that employers improperly favour the other.  In this era, young generation tend to have an edge over older workers, as they grew up using computers, automated tools and software applications for performing most tasks.  It is advisable for authorities to provide training arrangement s for older people to keep updated with new and emerging software and Internet tools. There is also a clear need to maximize economic output and taxation income, to support an ageing society with better social care and on pensions.
 
In conclusion, older people have long coexisted with a much younger generation in the job market.  Although this does not measurably increase the unemployment rate, in the depressed realities, tensions will swell and actions to prevent the alarming trends turning worse may well be contemplated and implemented.   
 
相关词汇和语法结构
stamina  耐力,持久力
automate  使自动化
taxation  税收
swell   膨胀,增大
contemplate   考虑,考虑接受,深思熟虑